"What's a matter with you?!" The soldier demanded, grabbing something out of the contents of the box and waving it in the air, "Haven't you ever seen a collection of legs before?"
OHH BTW, i need to ask about Lee's family history. It's kinda relevent to something i would like to have between her and Baz. (just a better understanding on where each other's from.) it's probbly the most serious conversation for the two to have but it's to help give the reader some character development too.
Oooh~ well hm. that was a bit sketchy still for me, so it can be tweaked to flow better for your needs... but I currently have it as where her brother and father joined in the war a while ago, for whatever reason I dunno lol... so she was then just living with her mother.. passing time with things like sports to explain how she can run like most scouts do. Buuut then her mother died due to cancer from smoking too much so she was all on her own, and decided to join in the war.. since then she could possibly do a tiiny bit of good. That's what I had in mind, but her brother and father can still be alive.. or not. she probably assumes they're dead... hm. when I type that out, it sounds reaaally cheesy to me, haha. but for relationships between her family, hm well.. probably got along wonderfully with her bro and dad, and pretty much just as well with her mom, even if she stayed out of the house whenever her mom smoked.
YEAH well, change it however you want/need~ since it's still so sketchy for me, I might just end up fiddling with it so who knooows...
hmm... well.. the idea is lee gets some bad news from home, so maybe that can be about her mother? Baz does try to act all brotherly, but i dunno if he really succeeded in this endevour. it's at least a chapter away so i can squeeze changes in still.
when I type that out, it sounds reaaally cheesy to me, haha. but for relationships between her family, hm well.. probably got along wonderfully with her bro and dad, and pretty much just as well with her mom, even if she stayed out of the house whenever her mom smoked.
YEAH well, change it however you want/need~ since it's still so sketchy for me, I might just end up fiddling with it so who knooows...
WOO. Walls of text!